Weird Government Um... what?
I don't really understand the plot, partially it might have to do with the text cutting away suddenly once or twice but also I think it wasn't fully explained.
The art was pretty good, but you didn't really do any animation except a couple of tweens and mouth movement.
About mouth movement, don't just use a couple of set images and usually if you're going to do it you'll include audio dialogue as opposed to text.